GrayLady

Wooow. This is good. I say this to everyone who writes poetry, but this honestly is, by all means. Being able to write poetry is not a skill you should ...

So, like I said, school project. Not what I would have chosen to do. It's supposed to be in my own voice...but as you can see, it's kind of not...anyway, ...

Let me promise you something; I was not wanted in my family. I was not the celebrated, exalted pregnancy, with a cutesy baby shower and banners that screamed “It’s a ...

Hey Shad! You were in The Lounge when I was in there...good times, right? At least I think you were. Call me Gray or Lady, but please, not Gary(: I ...

Whoa, you must have been really angry! I love the meaning behind it, because trust me, I've felt that way before. But when you said "where only the fantastic star," ...

Banned because that doesn't make sense in the current situation.

Okay, I know this isn't the way I write, and I'll never write like this again. I swear. But I wanted to try it out, and I'm not that big ...

Banned because I'm pretty sure that if you were 99, you wouldn't know how to use the Internet. And if you did, you probably wouldn't come here, and name yourself ...

Banned because Gray is my middle name, hence the American misspelling.

Uhh...I'd tell you how good it is, but good doesn't really do this piece much justice, so I'll skip over that part. Really. If I tried to explain it...oh my ...

Banned because your signature isn't optimistic enough, and that bible verse is MY favorite.

Okay, this is very, very wonderful, but there's so much missing from it, it's hard to appreciate...I felt lost, reading it, because I didn't know who was speaking when, or ...

This is good! I love how you went into such depth on the landscape bits, they're really beautiful. I'd look at your form a little bit, I feel like for ...

These are pretty. I think you should write more poetry like it, because you seem to be really good at it. The only thing I'd say is work on the ...

This is so sad, but it's so good! It's so sweet. In your writing, when you're talking about Jasmine's mother, you probably should have decided whether you wanted to say ...