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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol. I'm sorry. Love you too, hate you too :p

awwww. sorry :(

Thanks. And I hate jelly beans so naner naner!!!! muahahahahaha! And I doubt you'll be able to guess Jack's killer....

lol. I was literally crying when I wrote that. When I started writing the first story, Jack wasn't going to die. He was originally going to be the murderer.

Yeah I fixed it all. Except for the NO! part. I like that part so :p lol

Okay so I added punctuation, did it help? And I revised "The head part 2" A little bit

Um yeah. The jellybeans were a random idea. It's supposed to distract the reader from the gore a little bit and make you chuckle at the randomness of the situation. ...

I edited, and number 42 was hilarious

It does. Okay I will definitely edit this. Thank you so MUCH!!!! :)

Thanks. Sorry about the formatting. I couldn't figure out how to do poetry formatting, the poetry setting wasn't working :/

Oh, Janecontraire, I posted "The Head, part 2" If you want to read it

I really have no idea what you were trying to say, sorry. Your comment was just phrased in a way that's difficult for me to understand. You said that "And ...

I'm glad you loved it. I had hoped you would :)

Thank you so much! It means a lot.