GrandmaMuffin

Thanks guys :)

She sat quietly on the edge of the pool, freezing. However she loved the silence, and how the wind whistled past her ears, brushing her cheeks on the way by. ...

The last sentence made me laugh XD 'cus the whole time I thought you were talking about something totally different! In English we are reading Anne Frank and I thought ...

Hia Just wanted to say it was awesome and I enjoyed reading it :D ~GMAmuffin~

I luv it! 'Cus it describes me perfectly! People at school are all like,"Why don't you talk?" It gets SOOOOOO annoying! I can't really critique it because poems aren't my ...

Hia :) I agree with the rest before me. Main things: The light in the cave. Her being able to see after it left. It was a little confusing. Why ...

It made me CRY!!!

My cousin told me about it :B

You're very odd. I've read most of your work, and I still don't understand your style :) I've read this piece four times. Maybe to try and find a secret ...

oohhhhhhh. You should try em :D Found in AMERICA yahoo. They r like, cheese crackers shaped like fishes. They come in a bunch of flavors too. like pizza and motzerella ...

its all good:) and where do u live where Goldfish crackers don't exist? Lol

Hey when I said goldfish I ment goldfish crackers. You know the little orange fish? "The snack that smiles back"? And I might change it to a raven because I ...

Love the poem because it's better than mine as all poems are! So saying that, I can't really help you improve. Just here to tell you that you should keep ...

NOW I'M ALL EXCITED! I wanna know who the lady is and why she was driving back and forth like that. Maybe she works with "Chris". Or she could have ...

well keekers, that was really good compared to my poem. XD maybe you should read it sometime to make you feel good about your writing. ;)