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Well done. I think most of the little nit picks (very small things) were cleared up in the first review so I'm just going to tell you what I liked ...

Hi there. The flow and structure of this is close to flawless. I love how short the sentences are yet how perfectly it flows together. I also like the themes ...

Hi there. I like this. I think this is only the second time I've done a review for fan fiction. I've always had difficulty thinking of them as actual literacy ...

Hi there. I really like he format here. The use of italics and print is just that bit odd and different to set this apart. There are also some really ...

there This is really lovely. I have to admit I find it a bit odd. I like that you didn't just say "This is a simple, weird poem for fun" ...

Sorry rememberdecember I can't review that because you have posted a blog not a literacy work. If you just submit them as a literacy work I would be happy to ...

Hi there. The first thing I would like to point out is the length of the poem. It is very long. I think you didn't need the last two paragraphs ...

Hi there. I really enjoyed this piece. Firstly, I love that that you used an interesting structure for this poem. The I don't think I’ve seen it before and it ...

Hi there This is really good. I actually have a different view of your characters, yes they are unlikable in places, the swearing can be annoying, but I think there ...

Hi there I like this. I have a real soft spot for poetry that takes risks. This takes a pretty big one with the large amount of dialogue in it. ...

Hi there Like Skorpionne I think you have a great sense of rhyming and rheum. This poem has a strong backbeat that flows all the way through it, so that ...

Hi there I like this. I like the message and theme of this particular poem. The thing I think you could improve on is the repeat use of the phrase ...

Hi there I think this is the second poem of yours I've reviewed and I'm really enjoying your style of poetry. Like the last poem I reviewed it has a ...

Hi Upile I'm quite similar to you. Inspiration hits me at random times, like an idea or a line flashes into my head. I also write a lot at night. ...

Hi there I love this. Like I really love this. Firstly, your flow and rhythm is perfect. It literally rolls off the tongue. Secondly, as other reviews have pointed out, ...