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Hi there. Firstly, I really like the phrase "Young Old Wise Fool" Secondaly, a lot of the lines in the poem are really great. For example "while minding my own ...

Hi there. I really like this. I loved that you made a somewhat average and mediocre subject matter really interesting. This is mainly because of the fantastic and flawless flow. ...

Hi there. I really like this. I loved that you made a somewhat average and mediocre subject matter really interesting. This is mainly because of the fantastic and flawless flow. ...

Hi there. These were really good. I loved all three of them. They all flowed perfectly and the structure was maticulous. I also love the themes in his poem. there ...

and Thank you!!

and Thank you!!

Hi there. I really like this. I like the metaphor of the streets and pavement The one thing I think you could work on is the inconsistent rhyme. It becomes ...

Hello there I really like this. I really like the format that you used here. You turned what would have been a average love poem into a really interesting and ...

Hi there This is good. The structre and flow is really perfect. Pretty much flawless. However I think this can come off as a bit corny and melodramatic. For example ...

Hi there It's a really sad poem, quite heartbreaking, really. So it is very well done. However I think your flow and structure needs some work. It is very dense, ...

Hi there. I can see why you put this in other I can't really tell if it's prose or an odd kind of poetry. Not to say I don't really ...

Please rip to shreds. As you'll notice I don't name the main character (or characters) and instead call them "The girl" and "The woman" It is just a new technique ...

Hi there Wow, it's going to be hard to judge the winner for this contest, there are so many amazing poems here. I really like this one. The form you ...

Hi there Wow, it's going to be hard to judge the winner for this contest, there are so many amazing poems here. I really like this one. The form you ...

Hi there For someone that is not used to writing poetry, this is very good. The language is very nice and the themes and concepts are very interesting. However you’re ...