Gracie

Just because I didn’t cry for you Does not mean That I didn’t feel you leave. Mother Please believe that I ached for you With every part of me I ...

This poem i really interesting. There is soem fantastic imagery here. All the descriptions about the bar and the atmospher perfectly encpsulate and distill the mood of this atmoshere. The ...

Hi there. This is very good, The single voice narration was a great tecnique to use on this poem. And the voice shows a lot of pent up aggression and ...

This is great. Really spooky and haunting. I love your use of a single dialouge here, and the sort of faulse cheerfullness. It really adds to the scary in this ...

HI there. This is really fantastic. Great twist at the end. It really added a punch to the poem. The imager in the first stanza is fantastic and really sums ...

HI there. This is very good. Great structure and flow. It is very skilfully put together. What drew me to this poem is the first place in the title. so ...

The cold is turning my breath to clouds The sky is navy and without a single star The harsh glow of the city Blocks then from view My breathing is ...

TThis is very good. I think yuo have really lahed on to a intresting subject matter and idea here. I really love the last line. It really sums up the ...

Hi there. this is very good, but needs some work. The one thing that drags the poem down is the structure. The two line stanzas are very boring and conservative. ...

Hi there I'd like to start by saying this is a very dense poem. You have crammed a lot of imagery and descriptions into it. That isn’t to say it ...

I really like this. I love this very descriptive style of poetry. I also love that you did not use any capital letters. It makes it seem sort of loose ...

this is something new for me. My biggest worry is with the flow. I think It gets clunky in parts. I'd love to know what you think of it. You ...

Hi there. This was very good. Your use of launguage here is great. You avoid all cliches and keep everything vivid and strong. This poem here deals with some dark ...

Hi there. I only have one problem with this piece,but it's a pretty major one. I can't stand the character. She or he just seems very pretentious and annoying. It's ...

I saw my mother’s photograph today. In her high school year book. a small, grainy image from 1982. I found it at the back of my school library, after much ...