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This is really good. Opinion pieces are hard to write, especially something so stinging. Instead of just saying 'I don't like him and that is that' you gave examples and ...

Hi paulclover. As everyone else who reviewed this piece said, this is hilarious. It is also very witty and self-deprecating. I like that you did not shy away from the ...

This is absolutely fantastic. I'm not going to give you a full critique because I understand it's very personal. I'd just like to say this is beautiful, heartfelt and potent. ...

Hi HaydenMcaw. I like this poem but I think it could improve. Firstly, I don't think that the repetition does much for this poem. Repetition is hard to pull off ...

This is fantastically detailed. I have dappled in drawing a little but I've never been able to draw anything as realistic as this. And I do agree that hands are ...

Hi inspiredlight. I really like this for a few reasons. Firstly, your opening sentence draws me in immediately. "Try as I might, I could not overcome the intense feeling I ...

Hi Greatman I actually really like this. And I really like that you used no capitalization, because it makes it feel a bit more surreal. You do however need to ...

Hi Cspr. I really like this. As you said it is really creepy, in a kind of "crawling under your skin" kind of way. It's rather unsettling. It's a really ...

Hi Kawanwak I really like this. I love that you used olden day English on a modern day subject. And I don't think it's awkward at all. Your flow was ...

Hi Butterfinger. I really like this. It reads very well, almost like poetry. Your wording is perfect. I got really drawn into the story. There are a few things you ...

Hi Butterfinger. I really like this. It reads very well, almost like poetry. Your wording is perfect. I got really drawn into the story. There are a few things you ...

Dear Penny. I’m writing this letter because I need to say goodbye. I need to tell you all the things I never said. Your death came swiftly and tragically, and ...

Hi intellectualman I really like this, There is a certain amount of angst and sadness in this that I can relate to. There are a few things you can work ...

This is actually very good, especially for someone who's never written lyrics before. I like that you don't shy away from the morbid details. Don't worry about being too harsh, ...

This was very beautiful. If someone close to me had just passed, I would have wanted to read this. I think you some up the emotion and feeling very well. ...