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This has potential, but needs some work. Firstly, I recommend giving it an actual title, simply because thre are quite a few works on this site alone. Secondly, I think ...

Hi there This is the second piece of yours I've reviewed and I'm really loving all of your poetry. My favourite part of this poem is your last stanza "Walk ...

Hi MisterThien Really nice to meet you and hear about you. I'm a pretty new member to and have found YWS a really encouraging and lovely place. It's nice to ...

This is fantastic! There are so many things I love about this I'm just going to have to make a list. 1. Your dialogue is great. Many writers have difficulty ...

Hi MattLang. This is a very sweet and somewhat simple love poem. I noticed that it becomes more detailed and complex as the poem continues. I'm not sure if that ...

Hi there Really really good. I love the title for starters; the phrase "caffeine nights" is really lovely. Your flow is really good. I think it can feel a bit ...

“I’m a comedian” said Juliet. “And I make a lot of money, and I make a lot of people laugh.” “Then why are you here?” Asked Dr Amen Juliet looked ...

Hi there. I really like that you expanded this, it feels more whole and complete and a much better poem. I also like that you lost the dialogue because it ...

Hi there. I really like this. Your ability to translate chat speak to actual poetry is really good. It's really uplifting and witty and quite charming. I love your line ...

Hi Jenthrua I think writing fan fiction is really hard. I've seen this film a few times so I wanted to see if you could add a different angle or ...

Hi thestorygirl I really like this. Very original and interesting. When I first saw it I thought it was just going to be a simple description of a flower, but ...

Hi there. This is very good. I like it for a few reasons. Firstly, Your opening line is fantastic "I’m slowly losing control," It draws me in write away. Secondly, ...

Hi *singsoffkey* This is really good. A lot of people base poems and stories after family member. It can easily be corny and clichéd. This however is really good. Firstly, ...

Hi there This has potential but needs a little work. I think you need to expand on this. It has some very good lines and ideas in it but is ...

HI redpen123 This is quite good. It is very polished and effective, if somewhat bland. I felt like your opinions did not come through enough. I think you could have ...