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Hi there. Great, fantastic. I wish I could find a few more words for this. I just tell you what I love about it. Firstly, your opening sentence makes it ...

Hello there I really love this. I to know what it's like not to be a massive fan of mathematics, so this is definitely relatable. I love poems that make ...

This ones great 9/10

It was my own name. Plain and simple.

Hi there This is very interesting and has a lot of potential, but needs some work. Firstly, I think it goes on about four stanzas longer than it needs to. ...

Hi there. Wow. Really well done. If the subject was any less compelling, I would have called the form repetive. But here I think it really works. For me it ...

Very nice. As you probably already know, love poems are done very often and can often feel clichéd and repetitive. However this has a twist or a different format. I ...

Very nice. As you probably already know, love poems are done very often and can often feel clichéd and repetitive. However this has a twist or a different format. I ...

Walk me through the city Show me what I’m missing. Take me to the high streets Where the rats crawl under your feet. The ghost of this town speak there ...

Any genre and any work no matter how rough or polished. My fat reserves are running out so I really need it.

Hi there. I like this. For some reason I keep imagining this as a song being sung by Owl City. It just has that very descriptive feel to it. I ...

Wow this is great Although I love creativity and opinion, I have a real soft spot for facts. So combining both of them was just great. I don’t have a ...

Hi there This is really good. It's very wistful and sweet love poem. But I do think that there are a few clichés in here which is a easy mistake ...

I read somewhere that Scott Fitz-Gerald had a notebooks full of names, that he would jot down whenever they came to him. So I think that may be a useful ...

This has potential, but needs some work. Firstly, I recommend giving it an actual title, simply because thre are quite a few works on this site alone. Secondly, I think ...