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I'm sorry but I could not possibly disagree with you more on this. In fact I think your opinion is sickening. You think that a doctor (and they are doctors, ...

This is something that happened to me very recently. I'm not sure if it is particulary well written, but something I need to get off my chest. Dedicated to my ...

I saw a girl cry today. In my third period English. She came in late, her face red and crinkled. She sat at the edge of the classroom, trying to ...

Hey there This is quite good, but could improve a bit. Firstly, I recommend that you don't use symbolic names like "hope" and "doctor gracious". I takes away from the ...

Prologue It was red. It started from her left eye and wrapped around her whole jawline. Delta’s birth mark was bold and prominent on her face. It was impossible to ...

Hi there This is very good. Very quirky and interting By the end it was really endearing and heartfelt. I also think this would make a very good short story. ...

Hey there. Wow. This is very very dark and gripping. I proabaly would not have loved it as much if you hadn't put in the two paragraphs at the end. ...

Hi there. I really like this. I like it because you combined a really interesting and stereotype breaking opinion with genuinely good and well flowing poetry. I think this voice ...

Hi there. This is a pretty dark poem. I love how it starts of with all this trady and angst and sort of keeps sinking into it. The metapohr of ...

Hi there This is really good. I love your very imagery based style of poetry. It is very detailed and really paints a picture. This particular poem follows that describing ...

Hi these. I can se your new, so I'd first like to say welcome. This is very good. The language is reallty lovley and so is the subject matter. The ...

Hi there. These are really good. I really love the second one, that you tweaked. What impressed me the most are the really bold colours in the phots, and they ...

Hi theere. This is very good. I really love how you could say so much in so little. You told a complete story and set a tone in a really ...

Hi there. This is ok, but you could improve a bit. Firstly, it feels like this has been made by formula. It is quite repeated with all the weather related ...

There have been a few articles on religion lately, so I thought I might post something from the different side of the faith spectrum. Enjoy and please comment. Sometimes I ...