GoodieGoat

Hello there Mint! I appreciate you taking the time to read this and voice your thoughts. It's always instructive and encouraging. To answer your first question Valalar's curse was ment ...

Thank you I needed reminding of the importance of placing the reader inside the mind of the character.

Hello again I'm replying to this message in the hopes you'll see it in your notifications as my main reply was glitching on me when I posted it as such ...

Hello! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and critique it. As you had commented, it was long. Sorry this isn't formatted as a reply I couldn't ...