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Re: Little Samurai
hahaha I know where you got this story from!!! Warcraft, the pandaren race right? Anyway, I liked the twist on the whole smaurai thing but you need to read over ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Paths by James Goh
Paths These paths lay out before me, Each led me of to a different reality. The one less traveled, Becomes clearer once revealed. One comes close, Beckoning, make it the ...
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: The Hubris Noose
I like the noose/suicide metaphor for hubris. the poem was extremely descriptive and left quite a vivid my mind. Overall, well done i say
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: Time by James Goh
Time is the butterfly, It flutters from our grasp with each fleeting second. It is the heel of rich men, The Eden for poor, It waits not for the end ...
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: Affection
Sounds like you have great experience in matters of love. I love it. Help me out in that area sometime man. haha.
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: City girl
I like how you used the sky as your comparing point as to the differences between city and suburban living. Its a good and original metaphor because its common but ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Paths Life Take by James Goh
The paths Life take, Destiny, the choices that we make. Skyscrapers, highways and streets, Roads off the beaten track. Forests, brambles and thorns, Abandoned cities, ruins long gone. Sights for ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: All Was Dark/Light (Two Halves of A Whole) by James Goh
Two Halves Of A Whole (Forest, Forest, What Happens In The Night?) All was dark. The leaves rustled as a cool night breeze blew across the sky, illuminated by the ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Dance of The Butterflies by James Goh
The Dance of the Butterflies "What, you want my headphones? Yea, they're in my bag. Grab 'em yourself will ya?" he swooned coolly, that boyish smile settling in a little ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hey guys, my name is James and I'm from Singapore but i live in shanghai, china. Looking forward to receiving reviews for all the stories i post on here!!!
Oct 16, 2007
