Goldenheart

Loved it! This sort of light-hearted piece brightens up one's day, and makes one walk around with a big goofy smile on one's face. :wink: MORE!!! Goldie

Wow! Your mental pictures are amazing! Your descriptions of their attitude and appearance are really good. The poem wasn't too long. You cut it off at just the right time. ...

I like the content. One or two lines were just a teense awkward, it's true, but if you do it right putting it to music, I'm sure it will work ...

Granted, but now you cannot leave your room, because the rest of the house is so messy. I wish I could paint pictures.

I like it. Makes you wonder what it means. I'd pick it up! Whurn.

Hey! My, it's nice to have so many new people! And from TW, too! Glad you like it here, and I hope you feel at home on this site! I'm ...

Granted, but there is still a condition called 'Lack of Inspiration' which is just as dreadful. I wish that I had a good idea for a short story!

I just love 'Mere Christianity'! I also liked 'The Screwtape Letters', though I didn't get a chance to read it all the way through. C.S. Lewis is one of my ...

That's funny! The first line I liked especially. I've got a question, though. When you said 'shoe it out' did you mean to say 'shoo it out' ? I liked ...

What I liked about it, among other things, was the feeling of time passing. It felt like weeks passed during the course of the story. There was lots of action, ...

Eh! This is insane! I'd actually just started a screenplay last night! It took me two pages to find out that I stink. Oh well. It's fun! Does it count ...

NaNoWriMo begins in November. I've never actually done it then, but this year I intend to. Goldie

I'm in the middle of reading it now. DON'T TELL ME HOW IT ENDS!!! :D Goldie

Granted, but you make an abundant amount of enemies. I wish I could play violin better than I do

Wow. I really liked it! The irony and the contrast between the two is amazing. It conjures clear images, and you keep the piece going without getting boring. The flow ...