Goldenheart

Granted. It now stinks. I wish that I had won that poetry contest!

In order for us to identify 'flaws' in the human nature, we must first establish that there is a standard of behavour. We are flawed compared to what? If we ...

Just stories? Are you into poetry too?

I write fantasy most all the time, so I listen to 'The Lord of the Rings' and 'Narnia' soundtracks while I write. I also listen to Nickel Creek's 'Why Should ...

Ah! You've captured the emotions and thoughts of a tornado! Bravo! I would have thought they'd be a bit more dizzy. I like your choices of words. Very good!

I think it's very good! I particularly enjoyed the remark about us being related to dirt. It had never struck me that way before, and I laughed my head off ...

YUCK!!! :lol: This is a sweet scenario, really. I like it. There IS something about gross-ness that makes bonding easier, though I'll never really understand it... You expected remarks about ...

I've never seen it, but from reading everyone's posts, I think I can guess what happens. Certainly an unexpected happening, with *insert name here*! Never would have thought it. Unfortunately, ...

Granted, but someone corrupts it. I wish I could finish my novel!

Your descriptions of the blood and wounds made me shiver! Your word pictures were uncanny! Brrrr! The switching-off of the rhyme scheme at the end is interesting. It packs a ...

Great poem! I'm afraid most of my thoughts have already been communicated by somebody else, so I can only agree with them. I loved the imagery, especially in the second ...

Granted, but now the game is over, and the rest of us are very sad. :cry: I wish I could play any instrument well.

I agree that truthful critiques, however disappointing to the author at the time, are very helpful in the long run. I don't mind when people say they like my writing. ...

Oh wow. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing. This is so great! Can't wait to see what happens next! :lol: KEEP GOING!! Goldie

Hi! When I first came here, I was pretty confused too, but there are plenty of friendly people here who love to help. Hope you enjoy the site, and I ...