Goldenheart

Inspiration is a tough thing to nail down and label, isn't it? Personally, I think in pictures, scenery, or lines of dialog. Very odd, but sometimes storylines and characters simply ...

I've never read Baum's books, but that sounds like you could do all kinds of things with it! The book I'm writing... (well... editing, actually,) came from a night last ...

WOW! I really like the flow of it, and the readability! Straightforward and pretty, well communicated! I can only imagine what the tune sounds like, I'm sure it's great! :D ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Reading this fantastic article has alerted me to how very dreadful my battle sequence is! I am going to change it! You've been a ...

How many stories have I read with tall, mysterious strangers who keep all these dark secrets and do strange things without explaining anything? That is like asking how many ants ...

I've written few stories, and titled fewer, but those few, I must say, DO present some problems. Often enough I just take the name of the main character, or a ...

What do you think about one-word titles? Like 'Audacity,' or 'Emma'?

Hee hee! Oh, that's nice! The utter chaos of the situation is familiar to me. :) There were maybe two lines that I tripped over, but perhaps I read it ...

You've a way of taking childhood memories and pulling them to the front of a reader's mind! Wonderful! Beautiful and descriptive! Keep it up! Goldie

Hey! I liked what you had to say. (I'm not the kind of person who is qualified to critique grammar, I'll leave that to the others.) The lonely, uncertain mood ...

Wow! I've never heard Annabel Lee imitated in such a way. I recognised it right off. Very creative! I enjoyed the rhythm especially, the way the lines rhymed, etc. I ...

Oh! Oh! Oh! I declare, I was just sighing and pining away for some sort of work concerning Jane Austen, and lo and behold, here it is, staring me in ...

Hey! In response to a previous question, I worded my statement badly. (What a surprise!) What I meant to say was, the prologue to my book is in poetry form, ...

Hey, thanks, guys! Thank you also, Sumi, for pointing out my grammar mistake. How embarassing! I'm glad you liked it. Goldie

Eragon Sterotype Fantasy? Absolutely not! If it was, we should all run screaming from our computers. You ask for advice on the STORY, yes? Not grammar or style? Or did ...