Goldenheart

Mad! 'Tis very good. I caught only a slight repeat, where you used the word 'success' in one sentence, and then again in the next one. No big deal, though, ...

Nicely done! The details are thorough. You feel as though you know your way around the house. The mood is well told. I've a small suggestion. Just a teeny one. ...

Hey, guys! I'd like to know... is anybody else planning on doing NaNoWriMo this year? I know I am! Though last year I had an idea of where I was ...

Thanks, guys! I'm glad you liked it. Does anybody think it is too long? Or too hard to read? Is it confusing? I'm flattered that you'd like to see the ...

Hey, Mad! Where/when are you going to post more of Blacklake?

Did anybody bother to post the answer to the quote on the first post? I will! (At the risk of repeating somebody else) 'Just thinking about tomorrow clears away the ...

I've never heard it before, so I don't know what it has to do with Disneyland, but it sounds to me like a time-travel/fantasy. Somebody who gets locked in the ...

I'm homeschooled too, so of COURSE I appreciate my teacher! :D I can only image what it would be like to have proffessional writers as parents! My english class consists ...

Why not end the previous chapter describing something. A house, a tree, or something like that. Then, in the beginning of the next chapter, describe it again, but using the ...

AHA! So THAT'S what I was reading! Is it titled 'Off the edge of the rainbow', your draft of this? If I'm wrong, please tell me, so that I can ...

I love your plot! It's original and interesting, and I'm sure it's a great read! Suspense, emotion, a dash of fantasy. Delicious! 'The chronicles of Oblivion' is a riveting name! ...

Eh! I too drown in stories. I've been writing and leaving off on stories for years! Finished only one, in my entire existence! 'Flighty' is a good way to put ...

Granted. Now she is insufferably peppy, and you can't bear to hang around her. I wish I knew how to write better battle sequences!

Many people who have posted on this subject have read Harry Potter, but not Lord of the Rings. I am exactly the opposite, having read Lord of the Rings many ...

What is your favorite book/books? What authors have most influenced you?