Goldenheart

This is wonderful! I really liked it! The way you described it was simple, yet powerful. The picture is pulled clearly into the reader's mind. I especially liked the mental ...

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Sweetpea

Very, very good. I loved it. I admire your ability to write a somewhat long piece, without getting boring, of giving the feeling that you're dragging on and on. I ...

I think I am going to be sick.

I loved it! The emotions were well communicated, the sadness. The rhythm I also liked, flowing, yet with a pattern to it. Very nice! Keep it up! Goldie

I'm sorry, Fishface, but I didn't understand any of it. Were you trying to make a point with similar sounding words? Goldie

I almost always listen to music. It varies, from classical to folk. Usually I listen to soundtracks, namely LTR and Narnia. They're both very nice, when writing fantasy. Music for ...

Granted, but you've got to eat something thoroughly disgusting for lunch and supper. I wish I could finish editing my book soon.

Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! What sort of fanfic do you write? And what sort of fiction? Fantasy? Realistic? Romance? And what sort of poetry? Great to ...

Eragon had DWARVES?! Oh wow. I tried to read Eragon, but had a lot of trouble getting through it, for the above-mentioned reasons. Plus it sort of seemed that the ...

(Is there a way to rate this? It's getting just a little graphic. PG at least? Just a suggestion.) Pinkle blinked and blinked. Why was he lying in the flowerbed? ...

Gail Carson Levine, C.S. Lewis and Tolkien. :) I am a complete 'Fantasy geek', though we prefer 'Realistically challenged.' :)

Granted, you can talk to animals, they just can't understand you when you talk. I wish my eyes were a discernable color!

I agree. If you've read the first five, you've pretty much read them all. I must say, though, that he writes very well. The villains are riveting. I liked the ...