Goldenheart

Yeah, me too. When you say 'The plot is better served in third person', what do you mean? Do you mean that you want the reader to know things your ...

I've got a problem. I am rewriting a novel of mine, and I'm having the hardest time getting my characters from point A to point B in an interesting way. ...

Pinkle and Flin stood breathless inside the building. It was too dark to see what sort of building it was, but the stuffy odor of hay and the pitchforks lined ...

I hate to be a stick in the mud, but I've got to ask that if you intend to personally attack each other, you do it someplace else. We're here ...

That's the spirit! It seems there is much about you that I would say about myself. Not about rebelling, though. I'm no rebel. Just a writer. I also live in ...

You can really get people to relate to this! Well done. It was sad, and painted a picture of what many children feel, but can't express. Bravo. The ending was ...

It is a science experiment. Soon you'll discover what happens to firmenting rootbeer, and it will somehow be important, and you'll become a world famous scientist. :) Why does an ...

Granted. You are no longer lazy. You are now sluggish. I wish I could travel to exotic places.

I liked it very much. It reminded me of the stone statues in the white witch's courtyard, in the Narnia books. Well communicated, swift style, punchy language. You included appearance, ...

Alice in Wonderland/ Through the looking glass The Chronicles of Narnia Peter Pan Beowulf Sir Gawain and the Green Knight Three men in a boat (Anybody read it?) Pride and ...

Granted, but readers complain that it is impossible to read. I wish I had a mind like C.S. Lewis.

Right now I'm reading a perfectly marvelous book called 'Hope was here.' I admire the style so much! Anybody else read it?

Exactly! It's also infinitely easier to write when you're in the mood. LotR is amazingly helpful, especially in really big scenes. When a scene is especially peaceful, I listen to ...

Yeah, that really caught me off guard too. It always happens when I least expect it. :)

I don't know why, but it reminds me of a gangster. You know, with a black trench-coat, standing in an alleyway. Ernest P. Smurklestien