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Re: Sinner's Gamble
ooh, thanks for the review, I found it most helpful, anyhow, anyone else want to comment? really? no one? well hell, Peace, God
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: The Doctrine
Be at peace with the world, and be at peace with yourself. Know well your limitations, yet strive to overcome them. Take joy from what you do, and bring joy ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Evi, this was quite brilliant, a bit random, and I am not sure how you actually thought this up.. I do have the same sentiments about Google though, Google addicts ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Hey dudes and dudettes!
hey there, I am known in some circles as God, I deeply apologize if aforementioned name offends you, if so, please feel free to create on of your own desire, ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Sinner's Gamble
We danced all night, on the edge of a knife, in the morning we gambled, with the Devil's dice. We lived to fight, and we fought to win. Our love's ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: perceptional poetry
an amazing poem, pure genius, anyhow, this is one of the most unique things I have ever read, and yes, it is all of thsoe thing adna, and from what ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Hey, what's up?
Hahahahaha, just about everyone here, in fact most of us are the exact same as you seem to be, except most of our names arent Suzy, anyhow, I am God, ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Newbie
I had my... hesitations at posting on your welcome, for the obvious reasons that you may well find my username offensive, I apologize for said offense, but on the other ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Demise of the gods.
this was quite a peice of work, honestly. I have not read somehting this... I dont know, since, the Odyssey, or Beowulf, I dont know, I really don't this was ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Oh Society...
ahh, another outlaw, greetings, can you hear her whisper? from your very birth? Mother Culture tells you what is right, what is true, but it's all a lie. Mother Culture ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Death of Love
a fair poem, I am sure, your rhyme was grand, your rhythm superb, if but your topic was a bit cliche, what topic isnt nowaday? your imagery was good as ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Ocelotoscope
well, this is an odd one, for sure, I mean, was this for some kind of contest or somehting, because while totally random poems are nice and all, does it ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: hi!
Welcome to YWS, I am God, and as I tell everyone, if the username offends you, then feel free to create one of your own to peruse. and what is ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Yet to be titled.
wow, this was an incredibaly emotional poem, about the impermanence of everything, life, love, whatever, of solitude, only met by the silent stares of mailboxes, now thats cool, but a ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: War (Ask Me No Questions)
I enjoyed your poem. after that is said, I think it neccessary to say that the rhythm was good, the rhymes were good, and well, this was a dark poem, ...
Jan 10, 2009
