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OK, this looks like fun. Name : Louis Karvoski Age : 44 Occupation : Nuclear Physicist Personality : enigmatic, aloof, anti-social, very likely insane. Appearance : Even though he is ...

hey people, this is me first storybook character, so here goes. Name: Chet McGannon Age: 29 Gender: Male Position: 2nd in Command Security History: Ex-cop, quit his job as an ...

oh, thx, didnt notice that, one of those commas was supposed to be a period. peace.

Very interesting, i read the other ppls comments, and felt i must say something- the "loose ends" well, i think they are actually a plus, they make you want to ...

well for one thing.(this is an aswer to the above comment) it wasnt a chapter, was it? No. it was a prologue. anyhows. it was interesting enough, a little cliche ...

Like who? G. W. Bush? You know whats funny? Joseph Stalin killed more people than Hitler did... and almost NOBODY knows. No chat speak, please - Mod

yeah, i can see that. ill try it, and see what other ppl say.

Unlike Them Wandering, Wandering as though you are lost, yet all around you, are those you called your friends. Fakes they were, for in your time of need they turned ...

thats just creepy, too easy to tell its edited.

Life does go on, as we knew it would. All the pain we took, for the greater good. All the lies we told, to those who care. For the love ...

Who do you think will be remembered in a hundred years? how about a thousand? 1. Jesus Christ - famous 2. Adolph Hitler - infamous 3. Gandhi - famous 4. ...

Robert Burns. Cat Stevens isnt a poet, but i think he deserves to be mentioned. he rocks. he's a singer in case you didnt know.

Blasphemous Teachings Prologue "You have been charged with teaching blasphemy and heresy among the lesser folk," the judge spoke, his voice echoes across the room. "As all those present are ...

It was good. well written, good description, nice flow, at the end, it has a nice ... finality... to it. four stars.

Well, this is the first pirate story I've read in a while... i wonder, have you read Robert Louis Stevenson's Treasure Island ? it reminds of such, we all need ...