God

don't be sorry, just roll with it, its all good. we should talk sometime, if you really feel that way about the world.

but my friend, I see no reason for it to be a poem, everything is but what it is, and well, you may have written it like that, but I ...

I believe that every creature, every living thing, in fact, knows instinctively what it is supposed to be, what it is supposed to do. A lion who has never known ...

haha, my dear friend, we will come to those in time, first, let me introduce myself, I am God, if the name would offend you, please feel free to call ...

interesting... interesting in deed... how many of us look at the world, and see chains?

the only other thing to say is that a poem can be read in a multitude of lights, each one giving it's own spin on it. and June dear, you'd ...

not a nerd really, and yeah, that's part of the point, I think It is a perfectly legit answer, whatever your age

just out of random curiosity? why does it say you are only 15? how many 15 year olds do you know from Iraq? not to be a doubting thomas, but ...

Welcome to YWS Velvet, I'm God, if the name offends you, feel free to make up your own for my use, I don't mind, anyhow, Paris huh? Cool, couple things ...

umm, just to make a correction, most of us are NOT grammar Nazis, but most of us would also be fairly offended if you used excessive chatspeak/ poor spelling, anyhow, ...

thanks June for the review... and I think I will take this time to clarify some things for you and the other readers, go ahead and check the grammar/ punctuation, ...

the story seems incomplete, as if there is something more to come before or after... and as of yet, I also do not see the connection of the poem with ...

huh... whoa... that was cool, so she's an imaginary friend... I don't think I've seen that before... a story from the point of an imaginary friend... niice, well, honestly, it ...

It seems to me that the MC is getting executed, but I do not know why... it is a good job of describing the anxiety, but it leaves the reader ...

heyo, Welcome to YWS, Im God, and if the username offends you, feel free to invent one of your own choosing, I don't mind. anyway. you dont have to bee ...