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Re: The Lost Room
William: "maybe i should go?" he says, "I dont want to intrude or anything" "bit late for that" says Andy "yeah, sorry" he turns to leave **sorry i ent got ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Death's Dance
Great poem about freedom, and being unafraid of the next step, at the same time, wanting someone to take the plunge with you. if i read this poem (which I ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Things Seen In Cab-Ride #276
Viva La Revolucion! this is a very angry poem, or at lest, its passionate. and i have to agree, the last stanza is probably the best, youre saying, "If this ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Endless Time Stops
Im not sure what to put here, it was a good poem, and i liked the way you presented it, kind of like... broken, yet whole and fluid. The idea ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: A solider's song
***whats the matter people? Im still here getting my ass shot off, what would happen in a real war if two of em just dropped out?, anyways, lets continue*** **Ill ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
**I dont know if Ive posted this or not. I can not find it, so ill post it again. (granted, I tried to post like 6 times the other day, ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: A Service to Society
well, for one, the main character was actually a girl. i dont think i mentioned that though, did I? and another, ive re-written this since then, so its a little ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mr. Publisher
Loved the poem, Viva La Revolucion! but, Vain, and Crayon, while they do not match are pretty darn close, close enough, to me. on the other hand, i did not ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Scott
Short, sweet and to the point, this poem would make a great card, I like the way you made it have a sort of... i dont know, innocence to it ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: The Ultimate Storybook (3)
**we obviously have different concepts of telelpathy. I was not listening to your thoughts, i was merely projecting my own in a speech-like manner, i view these as different things, ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: God, I love you
well, I never went much for the whole "I love you" sentiments, but the poem wasnt bad, it was a little un-poetic, too plain. so i agree with other people, ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: The Ultimate Storybook (3)
**Gasp! you dont want to get rid of me, do you? {smiles} ** Richard: feeling mischevious, he decided to play a small joke (ha ha) on the vampire who had ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: A solider's song
**"One of the Highland regiments went over the top in its first battle behind forty kilted bagpipers, skirling away for all they were worth— at machine guns" -Dalton Trumbo, Johnny ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
**Singer, a little blunt, most pepole wouldnt tell that kinda thing to someone they just met, but hell, and everyone else, this is going a bit fast, if you arent ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Teenagers
**whatever** Mark: (Friday, First hour) "hey teach!" "What is it now Mark?" "Can I use the bathroom?" "Wait untill Marissa gets back." "but its 'mergency" Says Mark "i really gotta ...
May 19, 2008
