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Re: Obsession
I liked, it. and I agree, most definatley with the fist critiquer(?) as I have not yet viewed teh other. It was well written, well presented, and dealt with issues ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: West Winds Fall
Well, those malicious people (I am NOT talking about anyone in particular) go... and... well, lets not go there. It was a great poem, a bit long for my taste, ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Mahatma's Grief
So, I have read thy poem, and then read the comments. It was a very powerfully moving poem, and Mr. Gandhi was one of the most amazing people I have ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Mahatma's Grief
So, I have read thy poem, and then read the comments. It was a very powerfully moving poem, and Mr. Gandhi was one of the most amazing people I have ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Things They Say
Thank you all, for the replies, but I have to say, I agree with the Novices, no, the last line is NOT out of character, It's a statement. It needeth ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Things They Say
They say that we are safe, that the bombs are just for show, but what will come tomorrow even They can never know. They say that Armageddon, is just an ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Paper Faces
My face is a mask, for the world to see. Caught up in secrets, that one cannot know. Giving false hope, lies continue to grow. And we grasp for a ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Twilight vs. Harry Potter
ouch, you really shove it in Twilight's collective face, don't you? don't worry, because, frankly, I agree with you. peace.
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
Thanks both of you, and yes, to answer your question, the meaning of life is plainly, just living. To live your own life the way you think you should. and ...
Aug 1, 2008 -
Re: My goodbye to a teacher
That was beautiful, and I am 100% serious. Such raw emotion, it takes someone a lot of feeling to write something like that down. My hat's off to you, even ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
There is an innocent beauty to a flower. Like that of a young child, first discovering their world. There is a Magic to nature that will never be explained by ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Think (chapter one)
yeah, it got better towards the end, it just started out a bit choppy.
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: the unknown
nice poem, it builds, Im not sure form where, or to where, but its good, I like the way the poem progressed, but if there is anything wrong with it, ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Think (chapter one)
hmmm... sounds like she's got a telepathy complex, i recommend a dosage of strong hallucinogens, preferably taken with a strong alcohol, that should take care of it, ha ha... but ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Dirty Work
ha ha, I liked this, it was amusing... it kinda reminded me of a story a friend wrote... about chickens... anyways, the flow was realistic, and the characters believable. I ...
Jun 28, 2008
