God

hey, you seem like a reasonable person... I call myself God, if that offends you, well, you are free to create one of your preference to use, I really don't ...

thank you, thank you, especially all of you who seem quite lost here, it's okay, we are all lost in the woods, I like it that way, and I am ...

oooh, a nice style, once i wrote very nice one about turtles, but hey, whatever, anyways, I think the point was more or less random, so I wont bother actually ...

you do like your crazy people, don't you? I mean, WHAT THE? I think, your work is frankly quite good, but seriously, are yo unsane?(similar to unsane, except unsane is ...

of course they do, dear, we all live in our own worlds, why? you ask? Because reality is just a word. sounds so simple, but it means so much, anyways, ...

I agree, sadly, for the type of poem this is, it would work much better if you cut out a couple stanzas, or combined them down, or somehting, other than ...

I thought everyone here knew? Math class is designated poetry writing hour., since we obviously won't actually be doing the math (sorry, bad pun) I loved the poem, the rhythm ...

thank you June, your review, while I will not totall ignore it, I will probably disregard the bulk of it, minus a few things I genuinly agreed with, thank you, ...

Hey Lit, I am God, if the name offends you, please feel free to call me whatever you wish. welcome to YWS, the place where you are free to post ...

hey, new member, huh? just be sure to post two review before you post any of your own work... it appears I got first reply, YAY me... someone might post ...

I lliked the poem, it had a nicce, somewhat unique rhythm to it, not a big fan of swearing in your work, but hell, it aint my poem. (I know, ...

as the proud owner of a mustache, I feel obliged to denounce your poem as blasphemy! muahahahaha! anyways, this was insane, silly, random (duh), and totally awesome, hey, sanity is ...

Hey Er, can I call you that? just Er. as they have already stated the rules, I won't bother, so, who are you? what do you do, besides writing obviously, ...

I have to say, this is an odd poem, what exactly is this? epic poem? about a star, I believe, but something else too. now what I really can't tell ...

The words are flowing through my head, As I try to recall what they've said, they whisper secrets in my ear, the darkest truths for me to hear. I know ...