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Dear HBGirl4ever. Starting every line of a poem with a capital letter is for amateurs and hacks. there's something called poetic license, that states any poet may do whatever the ...

this was... not bad. sounded alot like "The Matrix" though. you might want to check on that, see what you can do to create solid differentiation. other than that, you ...

Oh.. hey, Romeyo, I didnt notice that before... thanks!

thank you both, anyone up for some hardcore poetry analysis? ~Travis

They wash like flowers upon breakstones. They dance like shadows in the dark. They live like secrets kept too long. They creep like roseweeds all along. They sing their siren ...

I sold my soul for thirty dollars, and every morning I looked into the mirror to see, if Redemption had come in the night. I washed my hands, and tried ...

The music set our souls on fire And we found ourselves inspired To make wondrous things With our hearts and hands The many hues of blue and gold Paint visions ...

is it too late to join?

hey, this was actually a good poem, couple small things, waltz is so not the dance i imagine when i think of fire. I think that last part needs work, ...

there ya go, fixed and re-edited version. better than before

I apologize, but something seems to be wrong with it... or maybe i'm just computer illiterate, but i cant get the line breaks to work, so I underlined the last ...

Prayers for deliverance and justice, desperate hope that there might be an end this side of death. They waited in the shadows and asked with mournful truth when exactly is ...

thanks for the reviews yeah, I did make a couple changes, if its still too vague, dont know what to tell you. just to say, Abby, you haven't read much ...

Are You?

Born a child of Democracy, raised in harsh hypocrisy. We learned in school to read and write and lie, to never kiss and tell. Yes, we hid our secrets well ...