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Ooh! I love it! Kind of dark, a little mysterious. Fantastic! :)

I like this, kind of sombre. Very good flow, only a few errors but they've already been corrected. Well done! I love this poem.

I like this. Very good flow, only a few errors but they've already been corrected. Well done! I love this poem.

Wonderfully written. It feels... soft. I don't know how else to put it, it's just soothing, about real love, real genuine love. Nothing dis-functional or anything like that, just soft, ...

Try to use punctuation with your stanzas, it gives the reader more of a feel how to read it. Also, correct your grammar (capitalization mostly). Other than that, great poem. ...

I wrote this a long time ago but I thought it was okay. It's a little dark, just warning you. We were walking down a midnight road, the stars were ...

Very well done. I love the feel of it, how it flows. I'd like to read more poems like this. Very good.

Wow, I just love the metaphors! Keep it up, I'd love to read more from you.

This is good but I think you need to put it into verses. Since it is a long poem, you can make it feel shorter and more 'flowing' by using ...

Fantastic description. This is very good.

Ah, yes. Death. Quick, slow, unknown. Good poem but you might want to shorten up the last line a bit.

Beautiful. I love this. Your imagery is fantastic and I don't think there's anything I think I need to correct. Great work. :) P.S: I like moonflowers too.

I like this, it is kind of 'sing song'. Just a few corrections, and I added some punctuation. I want to write a love song to take your breath away ...

I like this but she does sound a little young, maybe it's just the use of the word 'momma' I do know alot of older teens who use the word ...

Thrown Away By: Makayla Johnson Chapter One There is a place for kids like me, it's called Juvenile Hall. No, I haven't been arrested yet but I've had about a ...