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Great wording! I love the flow. It has a sort of sombre feel t some points and I like that. An amazing poem, I currently have nothing to critique since ...

Wow, very well done! I love the description and it leaves you with a rather creepy feeling. Not quite chills down your spine, not quite a need to catch your ...

Short, simple and very true. Well done for someone new to writing. Very thoughtful. I like this poem, it manages to pack so much meaning into so few words. I ...

Thank you! I just wanted to try a style that could emphasize my point better.

Thank you! That's what every poet wants to hear.

Thank you so much. This poem, by far, took the longest to write because of the pattern.

Wow, thank you. I don't write a lot a ballads, so I'm really glad this one turned out well.

Thank you so much! :D

This one may be a bit hard to decipher but it's basically a poem about life's brutal kicks and punches. Lying, -Concrete grass- Dying, -Fatal slash- Crying -Of what you ...

I normally don't read love poems but I really liked this one. I love your two-line-per-stanza format and it reads very well. I would have to agree with TB317, though. ...

I'm describing an old street, full of cracks, dim, sombre yellow lights over a dark road. The traffic lights are green, red and yellow, the lamppost replaced the dying sun ...

I'm sorry to bump this but I would really like some feedback on it. I spent a long time on this poem.

For some reason, this reminded me of Redwall written by Brian Jacques, there was a poem rather similar to this one becasue to the use of metaphor. well done, though. ...

I've decided since my poems get little to no feedback, I'm going to comment on every poem with no comments. I can't see why you don't have any yet. This ...

Loved it! I saw you had no comments on your poem and after reading it, I couldn't figure out why. It's a brilliant poem, long but I wrote long poems ...