GoaGreena

I don't tend to bother with "style" or "Proper rhyme-schemes". The sharp transition was intentional as it was based on a dream that started out simple but took a sharp ...

When the moon is bright They howl with might They bite and they fight! At midnight. When the hour is near They smirk and they leer There's so much to ...

Have you ever noticed how black and white the world becomes after a while? It almost seems pointless to dream when all the world's dreams are simply.. washed away. All ...

Nice work! I quite liked this. The only thing I really have to say about it, however, is that the dialogue seemed a little choppy. Maybe I'm just used to ...

Wow... A very different style. And I must say I do love ancient Greece. I love the way it reads. A little choppy but for a reason, like thought rather ...

I am sorry for bumping this topic, but I really want some reviews on it. Go ahead, tear it apart!

I awoke rather abruptly to a hard slap in the face and a loud cry of "Wake up!" I groaned and rubbed my cheek. "Wha..?" I blinked several times to ...

Ooh... very poetic. This was a very emotional poem, I can tell. I can feel the sorrow radiating off of it, striking me hard. Your flow is fantastic! Nothing I ...

Really well done! i don't think I could change anything. You're grammar is great and this poem flows well. Very well done! I love it! Keep writing! Never stop. -Greena

Oooh.... I really liked this! Just a few things. Ding... Dong, Ding... Dong. Hear all these bells, those sweet silver bells, that all sound the same. We've found someone to ...

I awoke rather abruptly to a hard slap in the face and a loud cry of "Wake up!" I groaned and rubbed my cheek. "Wha..?" I blinked several times to ...

Personally, I liked your formatting. It was unique and something new that I haven't really seen before. It did end up breaking the flow a bit, but still worked for ...

Now, it's not a bad poem. I like it. The only thing is, it is rather cliche. It has been done before, but at least you've managed to write it ...

Silence. The song... I remembered hearing it. Darkness. What happened to the light? Moon's gone . I realized, gazing in the direction I assumed was up. No stars. Dusk. A ...

Love ' s for the birds in the trees, but babe I don’t know, if I could stand the image of you without me. A very good start, just missed ...