Glimmerglass

Wow. This is a fascinating piece, particularly because of its movement. I like how the stanzas flow together easily, and how you used symbols like ..., - , and ; ...

There are some excellent elements about your poem. For one, there is a very definite emotion you are trying to target in your poem. The reader can sense that. I ...

Quiet waters, and the bridge over pale light masks the dusky road. I would like to see the afternoon light swallow you up in the faint taste of autumn. Here ...

Well, I can't really analyze your piece because of my limited knowledge of the particulars of photography, but I can say that I enjoyed it. The reflection is exquisite and ...

Hi! Your poem is quite interesting. I read it several times, because the last line confounded me. However, I think I understand it now. Rhymes don’t bind They fly and ...

You were like the old Book on my shelf, the one I read when I was little And forgot about. You Were the faint smell Of cottonwoods and a barbecue, ...

I am drawn to its light, Like a moth to a lamp. Shot from the Archer Somewhere behind, An arrow of fire Ignites the columns From within, Like the kerosene ...

This is very interesting. I like how there's a subtle slant rhyme going on: "you, true;" "front, want;" "colder, shoulder;" "that, back." Did you mean to split the last line ...

Wow. This was fantastic. I liked especially how potent her anger was, and how wounded she felt being second best to her husband. You definitely captured her emotions in a ...

This is really lovely. The emotion is almost tangible, and I like how rhythmic the poem is. Your meaning is quite complex, and it's always more interesting to read poetry ...

Blind Man’s Banquet Inspired by ‘Whore’s Bath,” by Jorie Graham But even the full brilliance of this bread, and the water on my tongue, will not make the colors appear; ...

Never let go of that fiery sadness called desire. -- Patti Smith Melted butter is the taste of the summertime, the greasy warm feel of heat. In granny's kitchen they ...