Glimmerglass

Aw, so cute! I especially liked Grumpy. :D The glare seems a bit strong, maybe from a camera? I think that reduces the potency of some of the colors. Other ...

Hi, there, Eyes! Welcome to YWS! I'm Glimmerglass, or Glim. This is a great site to improve. I know I have! Reviewing skills, such as you mentioned, are definitely helpful ...

Hi, there. I really enjoyed this piece, as it was an excellent account of a funeral. About six months ago, I went to the funeral of a little girl I ...

Note: Written for ultraviolet's GOYLBAWS Contest 2: Remember Me Hi, Max. Yeah, I know this seems impossible. That you’re thinking, “How can I get a letter from you ?” Well, ...

Hi, Crimsona! Hey, for a first poem, this is very good. I like that I can feel what you're trying to express in this poem; that's sometimes difficult to accomplish. ...

Hi, there, Crimsona! Welcome to YWS! Your book sounds really interesting. I, too, am an atheist, or rather an agnostic, I suppose, so I can relate to your feelings. I ...

Hi, there! Welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this poem. It's powerful and well-written and poignant. I loved that there was a rhyme, but I noticed that it wasn't particularly ...

Hi, Maroono! Welcome to YWS! So, I liked the beginning of this story. It's fast-paced and interesting and vivid. The fact that it is written from a wolf's point of ...

Hi, there. :) First off, I like the statement you're making in this poem; it's a bit injured and defiant and angry, as if the narrator is finally tired of ...

Hi, Jagged. :) My first thought on this poem was that it reminded me of that old myth about the sculptor who creates a statue so immensely beautiful that he ...

Hi! Wow, this is really interesting. I'm curious about the back story and especially Annette's identity. Are she and Selene the same person? Twins? Is it a nickname? Your writing ...

Hi, DrowningInDarkness! So, when I read this, I was immediately intrigued. You describe enough of the scenario to make the reader interested, and yet leave much unsaid, so that the ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! This is a great place to learn and improve and have fun. :D I too like to write poetry and fanfiction; I find fanfiction is a ...

Hi! I really enjoyed the language you used in your poem. The first stanza sets a vivid scene in my mind, and, true to your title, it is a description ...

Hi! What I liked especially about this poem was the coherency. I could really understand what the poem was addressing, and thus it was emotionally effective. This line in particular ...