Glimmerglass

Thanks for the review! I'd love to change those lines to include the articles, but my teacher specifically asked us to eliminate those, sooo...:( That long line is also bothering ...

I Am I am sunlight breaking into the old growth forest. I am dusty fur and sweet horse smell. I am memories of cold creeks and crawdads and friendship. I ...

Hi! Here to review. So far, I really like this story. It's interesting and engaging and tells the me just enough to interest me without overloading the information. This is ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! I definitely agree with you about the Max-name-repeating, and that's something I can easily change. :) I also have to work on my showing-not-telling thing, ...

If Edward had killed Bella at the beginning of the series like this, then I wouldn't have had to endure the rest of the book! If this is a parody, ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. --Glim

Hi! Thanks for the review. I see what you mean. This poem is still a first draft, and I have hopes for its potential. I have to do my usual ...

Hi! Thanks for your review! I'll keep in mind what you had to say. Since this is fanfiction, I'm not trying to give too many details about the character and ...

I agree that it's short. I wanted it to be longer, but the last line just didn't let me continue. Will probably add some more after I sleep on it. ...

Note: Mockingjay: Finnick/Katniss Friendship Fic. Spoilers. “Finnick, I’m going to give you about two seconds to explain yourself before I kill you.” He snickers at me, holding up his trident ...

Hi, there! Here to review. First, I'm not actually sure if there's a first part to this, so I'm just going to review it as it is. :) I really ...

Hi, LauRux! Welcome! Good to see a new member; this is a great site, and I'm sure you'll have a lot of fun here. :D It's definitely a huge place. ...

Hi, there! Welcome to the site! Interesting poem; I agree with Sporks that it's kind of hard to criticize this, exactly. The language has kind of a joyful swoop to ...

Cement mountains; ah! Irony of succession, You will destroy me. Note: Haiku written while gazing at the forest.

Hi, Born! I liked this piece very much; more, I think, than the first part because I now have some back story. Lidia is fleshed out, and her character is ...