Glimmerglass

Hey, there! I liked your poem for a number of reasons: 1) It's simple and easy to read, which helps get your meaning across, 2) It's heartfelt and potent, with ...

Hey, sleepthief! So first off, what I really enjoyed about your poem was the overall impression it gave me; I could feel the narrator's emotions so clearly that they were, ...

Pearls I like to think that you planned that evening in perfect precision, like the wide stretch of pink over teeth, pearls rounded to sweetness by the caustic tightness of ...

Thanks for your review! Yes, my first drafts tend to be long. And rambling. Hopefully this is what I will be fixing in my second draft, and thanks for the ...

Hebrews 13:2 Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing so some people have entertained angels. “ Hebrews 13:2,” The Holy Bible In these fractured shadows, They made you ...

Just write. Write, write, write. Sprawl it all onto paper, documents, your blog, whatever. Write until your brain falls into itty, bitty pieces. Write because you can't stand to NOT ...

These are awesome. Just saying. I can't really cartoon to save my life, so I don't think I can really critique this, but just as a total bystander, I think ...

No grammar mistakes; I like you :P Agrees with Vampyre. :)

Umgah. SO GOOD. Love this poster. And just saw the movie, so super excited about the film in general. Great job with the composition, it looks entirely authentic and very ...

Hey, there, Glim here to review. First off, I thought your poem was very powerful and well-written. I think the desire to fit female stereotypes is so prevalent in teens ...

Well, I'm certainly not a teenage boy, but I do know a bit about the male species, from long friendships. 1. They often have a poor sense of hygiene. Like, ...

The best thing to do when naming characters (in my opinion) is to give them interesting names that suit the character, but not a name like Thumbelina Sapphire Ladyfire, because ...

I find that people (or characters) that are too nice are SO ANNOYING. They're always doing the right thing, always having the answer. This is obnoxious and annoying to us ...

Thanks for the review! I realized when I was writing this that the character of Meg wasn't developed very well. Unfortunately, I forgot about the deadline for the contest, and ...

Author's Note: Written for LavendarBlue's Five Words You Must Use contest. “You don’t know what antidisestablishmentarianism is, Meggy?” He says this in the way a sugar addict would talk to ...