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Re: You
Your fingertips, silky and cold like sweet cream, perform a dance across the soft hues of your skin; I, hot and heavy and longing with envy of those fingertips, lean ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
Hey, Glim here to review! I'm so excited. ^.^ So first off, I really adore your title. So far it fits in perfectly with the piece and makes me hugely ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: She Knows Him
Hey, there! Glim here to review! Gah, I just...totally and completely LOVED this. It's sweet and confused and has a great, original voice and is just perfect. I could totally ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Destined to be
Hey, there! Glim here to review! So, you have a great poem here! It's quite short, but you wrap up your thoughts nicely in two quatrains, so kudos for that. ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Oracle
Thanks for all your kind reviews!
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hi! Welcome back! I also just came back to good ol' YWS. It's nice to meet you! :D
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Ear Tags
Hey, there! Glim here to review! Eeep! There are so many things that I love about this poem! It's hard to critique this, because it's a very solid poem, but ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Welfare babies.
Hey, there! Here to review! So I have mixed feelings about this poem: on one hand, the overall impression I got from this poem was very powerful and tangible. The ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Endangered world and our future
Hey, there! Glim here to review! So, I liked your essay because it addresses a very real issue in our world today. Also, I love statistics because they help my ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Pearls
Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate the advice, and will definitely take it into account when I go into another round of editing. I'm glad you enjoyed my ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: hi, so how does this site work?
Hey, there, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll love it here: it is a most excellent place to write and find others with similar interests. :D Here is my personal ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Aloha :)
Who's your favorite character? I personally love all of them but Gazzy, Fang, Iggy, Nudge and Total just tickle me LoL expecially Total. And those unfamiliar with the books are ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: So...we meet again fellow writers! mwahahahaha...
Oh hi! I don't think I ever met you, but that's okay! Welcome back! :D Wow, med school. That's intense. Good luck with it! Hope to see some of your ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Yet another newbie C:
Hey, Rabbit! A fellow animal! As you can see by my avatar, I am a Night Fury. A toothless one, to be exact. :wink: And hurray! A fellow Twilight non-fan. ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Hiya!
Hi! Hi! Welcome to YWS! This is a great site to get informative, thoughtful peer reviews on writing, and already I have found myself vastly improved over the past year ...
Jun 23, 2011
