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Haha thank you! :) Have a great Easter!

Wow! Great! I am completely blown away by this work. The only thing that I would change is to use double apostrophes (quotes) instead of single apostrophes. (Maybe it's your ...

Hey manish! Looks good, but watch out for capitalization errors. There are lots! Also, this might just be because I'm a morbid cross between a bunny and a unicorn (bunnycorn), ...

This is such an amazing poem! This is the best I have read in a while. I can really sympathize for the MC and feel her pain. It made me ...

This is a very lighthearted, humorous story! Love it! And oh-so-true!

OMG!!! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!!! This is an amazing story!!!!!! The only thing that I would change would be the setting. What kind of atmosphere is it???? Other ...

pretty good, but not very funny (no offense) creative, but try and add a little more humor!

Love it! Fat Cat... Hilarity Ensues.

Awesome poem- You have to promise me you'll keep writing poetry for a VERY long time!

hi. okay, that was lame. let's try again. hi. that's better. ok, basically ditto to these reviewers. good story, but too depressing.

i don't get it. But it's good.

really great! i loved it! that's the best poem I've read in a while (and that's saying a lot :smt001 ) however, at first i thought i was reading about ...

good job! geez, you have a knack for making me hungry! :elephant:

still in progress... please review! JOURNEY TO ADAMARIS “Name?” “Valkyrie.” “Age?” “Twelve.” “And who are you visiting today, Miss Valkyrie?” asked the reception nurse tartly. “U