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LOVE IT! This made me laugh... p.s.- "rioty" = not a word. KEEP WRITING, THIS LOOKS GREAT!

Hey there Shin! Looks good so far, but I have some little nitpicks: 1st Paragraph: Ah! This paragraph really confuses me! Who are Martin and Alex? Which one is thinking ...

It began with a “Hello.” As many great loves do; However, this was different. I’d always somehow knew. We had always been destined, To never, ever part. Or so I ...

Thank you guys so much! I appreciate it! (so does my poem) :)

I don’t know how to put this. It’s not easy to say. But please just let me tell you, That not everything’s okay. No, it’s not at all alright, And ...

Nice job! I'm not an expert on poems, but I did like this one a lot. The rhyming, as someone mentioned in a previous reply, was subtle but had an ...

I agree with Stori--filling in details would make it more real. You'e got the right idea. Keep working at it!

WAHOO! A second, just as good as the first?? AMAZING! You've done it again, my friend! Well, I think that we need not discuss the fantastic aspects of this chapter ...

WOOHOO! Hey Gen, I decided to do a follow-up review, upon reflecting and realizing that my previous review was vague, and only covered the first paragraph-and-a-half, pretty much. So here ...

Hello Beginningtowrite!!! First let me say that this looks great! My best friend is actually working on a piece similar to this (in the love prospect). This is very well-written ...

Hey! Looks great! I could connect with the MC and I could understand her pain. This poem did take an unexpected and slightly emo-ish turn at "Life wasn't worth living"... ...

Hey! I thought this was great. Awesome work! One thing that I might suggest is ... NOTHING! Haha, I really had you going there for a second, didn't I? Seriously ...

HEY NITEOWL! Well, this poem looks great! I couldn't find much wrong with it... (yep, you guessed it, here comes the "elaboration") Except: ~I don't really feel like I could ...

LOVE IT SO FAR! Hey Gen! I love your first sentence. It grabbed me and wouldn't let go. (and yes, that is a good thing) The amount of description was ...

Lifewish: Prologue Fluid, graceful, poised. Back arched, arms raised, toes pointed. Breathe. In, out. Left foot out behind me, neck craned. Balance, balance. Lower. Back straight, toes pointed, arms u