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Looks great, BESS! (that stands for BrightEyedSoulSister, by the way) Well, I have someone in my class who matches your description PERFECTLY, (Sebastian, ick. Euggghhh.) so I can really relate. ...

Hello, Sapphire! This is a very interesting poem. It sparks intrigue, and I like that about it. Your poem is in the spoiler :) They're waiting, watching there (add apostrophe) ...

Well, see, Pat Buchanan and I were like, best friends at the time, so Patty was all like, "Hey, you should go to http://www.youngwriterssociety.com. And I was all like, "Thanks, ...

Thanks for all your help! And Azila, it's awesome that you're a ballet dancer, because I need someone to help me with that. My best friend is a ballet dancer, ...

Lifewish, Chapter One: How Can You Surrender? “Yes.” “What do you mean, yes?” “Yes, I’ll do it.” “You will?” “Yes, Evan. It’s time to finally--” “What are they saying?” Dec

Hello ink! This piece looks really good, and as someone mentioned earlier, I love modern poetry and loved the nonconformity and relaxation of this piece. Good work, keep it up!

A Perfect Image Am I everything you place me to be? Great first sentence! It attracts the reader's attention very nicely. Am I beautiful, amazing, kind, caring? How can you ...

Nice piece! I like it and you are very talented! Keep it up!

Nice! This looks good, but it's really long. Maybe I'm ADD, I don't know, but I sort of got a little bored around the fifth stanza. From what I did ...

Good job, Dogs! This is a great poem! Keep it up! I'm excited to read more from you. It would be nice, as stated above I'm sure, if there was ...

Welcome Newbies! *ergh* Yeah, I know you hate to be called "newbies", but once you're not new anymore, you won't have to deal with that! Anyway, welcome to YWS! Here ...

Thanks everyone! And Jellybean, I used to make the cover. The font is Folks3. Thanks again for your reviews!

Thanks everyone for the amazing reviews! Check out the prologue to my new novel, Lifewish, if you get a chance: Thanks again everyone! Your critique and praise alike are both ...

Hey Whisperer: Looks good; it is apparent of the time and setting, although it is not said point-blank. Watch your commas, there are some places where commas should go, but ...

Thanks Gracie! I really appreciate it! I made those changes... glad I did! :3