Gladius

O.o Oh, my gosh! So much to respond to! :thud: XD Well, here goes: If- if- if… I'd get rid of this. Maybe if she was actually talking, it would ...

You've kept the same style which can be really difficult, but then again, this is only the start, we'll see what happens further on. The plot is being explored and ...

Hey there Tres- welcome to the [s]insaneness[s/] community that is YWS! I may be something of a newbie myself, I may not be as experienced as some other people, but ...

yay! Perfect! *adds it into character's profile* I'll try to find a pic, too, but I doubt it will happen...

Ok...it's my first time in storybook, so wish me luck! Name: Tatiana (usually called Tanya) Age: 23, female Occupation: A mysterious girl who majored in biological engineering/genetics Description: Br

If someone wants to be the murderer, do we say in the secrets section or do we have to PM you, Rory? *is debating joining this storybook*

It's a rabbit? 6.5/10 for the pattern scheme. :)

Okie dokie, I've decided I will have a Christmas chapter. It may not be...exactly one of my best, but I hope it enlightens and stuns you. :twisted: *insert evil laugh ...

9/10 I'll join [s]a[/s] the revolution anyday! XD

Your writing is marvelous! :oops: awww shucks... I also agree with Tamora. I haven't played the games, though they've always looked interesting. Now I want to play them. You do ...

CrystalSorceress: When Jerry first saw the Cyan, he says: Quote: I didn’t pay attention. The door began to close. I didn’t think I’d make it, but I had to. I ...

Oooooh- Who is him? Suspense!! Ok, critty time!!: " SO what do you think?" I'm guessing SO is a typo, and there should probably be a comma after it. This ...

Wow. It sounds really good, and I love th' Irish. I'm thinking of this like a movie, it's so intricate! *whistles* That's going to be a chore. Better you than ...

oooh- the first day of Xmas, he gets a partridge in a pear tree and something creeepy happens... >.> What happens when he gets two turtle doves? :twisted: I like ...

9/10 Never seen the movie Elf, but it looks absolutely side-splitting: like the phrase in the avvie too XD