Gladius

Good start, Overflow! However, it has some formatting issues. Other than that, so far the grammar looks fine and punctuation isn't overly complicated, so nothing to fear...for now. On to ...

All right, I know I haven't been here long but I thought I would contribute something. :) Wish me luck! To the 'chat junkies' of teh Lounge-- there are too ...

Hey aprildragon (I haven't decided whether you'll be April or Dragon yet XD)! Fondest greetings from teh YWS dragon! :twisted: Don't worry, I don't bite. :) And if it's fantasy ...

Mountains and power lines suck . Dips in roads. Those always get our phones. >.< - [If you have a cell they break if you throw one against the wall? ...

Hey, Star! Welcome to YWS! If we were in the chat room now, I would pouncetacklehugglehug you. XD If you couldn't tell, I'm a chat room junkie. :) Cool, we're ...

Don't be shy - we don't bite. Well, most of us don't... *the dragon that is Gladius grins :twisted:* Don't worry, dearie, I'm a nice dragon. :) *suddenly remembers she's ...

This is probably a stupid topic, but I desperately need help. I can't hardly say it's a stupid topic without knowing more, now, can I? ;) A little background info, ...

this sounds sumb but how do you actually submit your story cuz i have been having trouble It's perfectly fine. Everyone has trouble with something at least once in their ...

Actually, it is called a gear stick, though it is part of the gearshift which is the mechanism that actually changes the gears in the gear box. Though, the gear ...

Waiter, Waitresses, the clerk at the store, the guy who you catch up with because he dropped his wallet. If it's an adult whose name I don't know, I usually ...

Ooooh- wow. I love it! I like how you've put Samus' thoughts about right and wrong into this. If this is a prologue I'm wondering how it's going to fit ...

...but as a culmination of practicing magic...magic users can basically evolve into them (though that's a sumary of something a little more complex). Interesting idea... I also don't like...comarisons

The only major problem i can perceive insofar is punctuation. So true, Morrow! However, I hope you read Jabber and Tamora's posts about these same things before you edited. ;) ...

Darn, I wanted to rate hers!! T T Well, I would definitely agree with you, anyway, Explode- 10/10 XD Yours...8/10 I don't know what it's about, but it's hilarious!

9/10, Argetlam- for thy name come from my favorite book. XD