Gladius

Interesting--it appears as if it's going to become a romance. It's needs a little bit more flesh, though... *cocks head and contemplates story thoughtfully* The dialogue's a little awkward, too...but ...

Ugh, sorry guys, but I've hit some major writer's block!! I'm introducing a few new characters, so it's a bit of a doozy working in the things that need to ...

I agree with rimewind. Also, the belly's too tucked up--the attaching line (wierd sounding, I know) from the belly into the tail needs to be a little lower so the ...

He he--I caught a couple mistakes! Very small things, but I caught 'em none-the-less!! :grin: *does a happy dance* Anyway-- knocked over by Susie , Susie took a sip and ...

9/10 First one--agreed Second one- very philosophical (we were actually talking about that in my gov't class) ^^

Personally, what I usually end up doing is a partial outline, which I follow for the first, like, 3 chapters then completely abandon it and let the characters and whatever's ...

*points to missing grade* You forgot siggy ;) Name: 80% Avvie: 60% Custom Title: 95% Country: 100% Siggy: 100% Overall: 97% Comments: Name--reminds me of the horse movie, and I'm ...

It also keeps me entertained in science class. Lol. I actually started writing in my homework notebook--it definitely entertained me. XD :backtotopic: Hmm, I've heard of writing journals, but I've ...

Wow, I love it. The way the sun's glancing off the dew makes it almost seem like ice. Coolio! Could you put up pics of the moose, too? ^_~ I ...

Username: 90% Avatar: 98% Custom Title: 85% Country: 95% Siggy: 100% Overall: 95% Comments: Go Phantom of de Opera--I can just hear the music behind your sig! XD *hi five* ...

Ah! I just had my long post finished and for some reason it ate it!! >.< To summarize in brief what I had said: 1) I didn't say image wasn't ...

Yup, that's why I picked it ;) 8/10 Cute

I'm a hardcore supporter of Obama Isn't there anyone else Republican (or otherwise supportive of) on here that will back me up? :( Perhaps those not in the limelight can ...

8/10 cute ^_^

9/10 Coolio! So you!