Giselle97

I loved this story. I think this was a good idea to began with. Its kindy sad how the girl mother died and the last thing she saw. I love ...

Nice work with the poem structure. I really the last part ;D.

Thanks I make sure I add some in there ;D

thank for the advice I make mistakes like that all the time. ;D

RUN! GET AWAY! GO! I screamed in my head. I wouldn't stand being hit another time. My head hurts, my leg is bleeding, my lip is busted, my cheek is ...