Giselle97

Your character seem to have a personal issue going on here. I would add a little more details about that but I like it. You shouldnt stop this story, keep ...

I Love your poem and how you feel when you with that special person.

I love your poem. The last part made me laugh. I thought you were talking about someone but you were talking about chocolate. I like how you describe your feelings ...

Thank you for the review and yes it is short but im adding more. ;D

I just couldnt get Soul out of my head. Everytime I think about him I get this funny feeling, a feeling I never felt in a long time and it ...

Hey I love you poem but you should had some stanzas so readers wont have a hard time reading it. Also "i" should be capitalize (always) because you representing yourself. ...

Hey I love all your poems, and love how each one express your feeling in something but it really dont catch a reader attention. But I love it ;D

Hey I just wanted to say this was a really good start but I think you should describe the way your character looks. How do your character feels about going ...

Wow this was really sad. I like the way you put the point of view from a boy (most stories are from a girl point of view but they're still ...

I just came across your story and WOW!.(Lml) I loved it but there were some mistakes in grammer and spelling. But other then that it was a good start. Keep ...

I love your story and your writing. I like how you let your Imagination take over your mind and how you make the character interact with each other. Good work! ...

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE BELLA LEFT EDWARD. SEXY, SMART, AND SO MUCH MORE FOR THAT(JACOB). TEAM EDWARD ALL THE WAY. NICE JOB ;D Giselle97

Hey There Your story is very good but you have to work on your dialogue, you use to much. Why don't you weave in some more description and inner thinking. ...

Lol Domo Like I care. Work on your grammer

Thanks For the review and I promise I will work on my grammer ;D