Girl_in_pink

Mister, you say "speak when your spoken to" But when i speak you have no time for answers. Mister, you say my answers make no sense. But the only sense ...

Sweet!!!...really loved it. Keep up the good work.

Hi again love it

DON'T LET IT BECOME CLICHE! Right now it is quite original and interesting, but I see how (in the future story) it could quite easily become no more that just ...

DON'T LET IT BECOME CLICHE! Right now it is quite original and interesting, but I see how (in the future story) it could quite easily become no more that just ...

I think bring the story mor einto play so i can fully see what it is im waiting for

Hallelujah for short chapters, but i still favor the long ones. Although this wasn't my favorite

I wanna here your views!

Comment and share your views!

They're probably have grammer and spelling mistakes but i would still like to know what you think of the story and what part etc. Shanti Elle (Skyler) Dear Scarlet Diary: ...

Thanks for the advice sam and i will keep you updated. luv girl_in_pink

HI EVERYONE THIS IS A DRAFT AND IDEA I RECENTLY THOUGHT UP. I know my work probally has a lot of grammer problems but apart from that, i would like ...

I think the opening wasn't quite strong. But overall a really great idea. Love it!

Read this again and you'll know what they're talking about.

I loved the idea although the last part (jacked me up) but overall good attempt and i can't wait to read more of your work and see your improved progress ...