GirlInTheMirror

Here's my poem for the September Contest. Comments and Critiques are greatly appreciated. Oh, and here's a link to the short story that accompanies this: . The writing prompt was, ...

Thanks for the messages! I'm glad you guys appreciated all of the connections I made to Dr. Oz, and the Wicked Witch of the West, and the electric chair, etc. ...

The story generator gave me, "Your story is about a judge sitting in a dentist's chair singing Wicked." Please give me corrections, general or nit-picky. I am determined to correct ...

What a twist ending man! Deffinately not expecting that! My one suggestion would be to have Jack say something more menacing than the joke about the dog house. That was ...

Thank you people for the reviews. I did a couple of quick corrections but I will try to get on the more lengthy ones ASAP. Why am I always busy ...

Could you pretty pretty please review the beginning of my story "Beauty's Beast"? It would mean so much to me!!!

awwww... The ending makes me melt like the softy that I am. I really like how Sam is kind of awkward and less adventurous and just kind of normal where ...

Hi. I really really really like this story, especially how no real action takes place but it is still interesting. The depth of description of Waverly's emotions is amazing. My ...

]I really liked this story a lot. It feels very fresh and new even though the topic of lying is so prevalent in literature, especially on this website. I'm gonna ...

Hi! Will you pretty pretty pretty please review my story Beauty's Beast? I know that it's fanfiction, but I am going to reconfigure it so that it is based solely ...

This is the first couple of sections of a short story I'm writing that is a twist on Beauty and the Beast . Prologue. Once upon a time there was ...

I love this poem. Although it has no rhyming scheme, you manage to give the stanzas a sense of unity by ending each stanza with a question about yourself. My ...

I'll be honest, at first I didn't get this poem at all. I had to read this poem several times in order to be able to understand most of it. ...

I really like this poem. I recited it to my pencils but unfortunately I received no response... Apparently they think the question is rhetorical. Good thing there are always computers ...

I love, love, love it! Even though I barely know Lisa, I can't help but feel incredibly happy for her. I think that everyone has had an experience where they ...