GirlInTheMirror

That was amazing! You have a serious talent goin on. Like others before me said, you have enough material here to make a novel. Keep on going with it! As ...

Hi! I was wondering if you could please comment on my story. It's commentless at the moment. Thank you soooo much!

Hi! You probably don't remember me but you reviewed my work at the beginning of the school year and it was amazingly helpful. Will you pretty please do it again? ...

My name is Jenny Fulton and I’m a murderer. And no, I’m not some character in a cliché action book. I wasn’t trained by a secret sector of the CIA ...

I deffinately know the feeling! The imagery in this was really amazing. I felt like I was having the dream too. There are several things you may want to change, ...

Wow that was really amazing. I'll be honest, at first some of it flew straight over my head, but after reading it several times I really liked it. There are ...

This peice was really witty and interesting. There are just a couple of things that you may or may not want to change. The first one, and the one that ...

Hi! I'm a new writer here that wrote a fresh take on an old tale too. My peice was also highly metaphorical (If that's a phrase) and I started to ...

With this pen I can craft. I can construct a marvelous mountain that reaches to the sky with snow capping the peak. This sentence seems to be a bit too ...

If you talk to yourself When you are alone, You are just thinking. If you are selfish When you are alone, You are just giving. If you are attacked When ...

Thank you Calligraphy and Shear! Calligraphy- I took some of your corrections and I think they really helped, thanks! Shear- I'll add the "and" and change "woman" to "female" as ...

Thank you Shear and Violet for the in-debth reviews. You guys are so amazing! Thank you, both of you, especially for the mini dialect tutorials. I was so very very ...

HI! Will you pretty, pretty, pretty, please review my short story wicked: or my poem Poor Mr. Diggs: for the contest. Thank you for considering it! If you don't have ...

Wow! I really like this poem. It flows so well, it makes me want to melt. I would have to agree with SimplyComplex though, the lines "I never felt lost ...

So this may not be a poem. I really don't know what the guidelines or requirements are for a poem, so I can't say. But what I will say is, ...