GingerLizzy

Well, I really enjoyed this and if I could say so, it is very clever. 500 words each to describe how you're going to affect the reader with that small ...

I sat quietly Hands in my lap, clasped. Tighter than Mummy's lips were pursed, Tick...Tick...Tick... We didn't talk, Or even look at each other. Just stared, at him, like an ...

I liked this, but I have to say I got a little bored after a while. The way you have placed all of the descriptions, one after the other, in ...

I liked this. I enjoyed the idea that you are using rivers and seas as a form of, "getting rid" or "cleansing" memories away. But I agree with MelodiCatastrophe about ...

I think this is actually really good. It took me a few times at reading it to fully understand, but I like the way you've made the smallest details, intricate. ...