GingerLizzy

Yes I also agree with everyone else. This poem is actually quiet good and I like how the words seem as though they are weighing you down in your fatigue. ...

Hmm.. Yes good imagary and I liked how it just... Continued. It made me think and smile.. And frown but I liked it. Good work ^^

I don't know what to make of this poem. Is it good? Or bad? I like the idea... But the structure? I'm confused with this one I must say. It's.. ...

Wow.. This poem is full of romace.. I liked it. I liked how the mood was dark and sad, but was brightened by the appearance of a boy in the ...

Hmm.. Good I think. The opening lines sucked me right in and as I slowly read the rest, I have to say I was reeled out. But I can honestly ...

Hmm.. This poem made me think for a while at whether I liked it or not. It's a tough one. But I came to the conclusion I did, in fact, ...

I loved this. I loved how you made the smallest details very intricate and dramatic. I like how you focus on a woman's cramps - Period I believe? - and ...

I liked this. Short. To the point. And also somewhat dark. Maybe you could make it one or two verses longer? Add more detail and maybe even make it darker, ...

Wow.. I like this I'm not sure about the rhythmn... [I can't spell ^^] but I have to say it made me stop and think, which is good. Describes a ...

I agree with Charlotte, I wasn't too sure about what was going on... But I have to say, it drew me in. It seemed quite passionate in some places, and ...

I liked this. It's structure is strange. The repetition is annoying. But I actually liked it alot. It's quirky, and different. Why should you use other people's stuctures and templates? ...

It bubbled and stewed, Like the slop that they served for lunch. It writhed and squirmed, Like a worm worm in two halves. It shouted and screamed, Like a child ...

In this series; Change of place Settling In Friends or Foes? Check them out if you like this =] ---------------------------------------------------- I hate it here. I hate it. Why did we ...

"Blob. Blob. Blob." That's all it does. "Blob. Blob. Blob" A heavy sigh escaped my lips and made a small patch of mist cloud over the glass, as I sat ...

Okay, so I'm not so good at the whole poetry scene and most of my attempts are simple and only short. I'm not the kind of person who sits with ...