GingerLizzy

Uhm.. yeah and I've posted it in the wrong place... My god.. I'm having a bad day.. Sorry

Okay, so I have no problems with ginger people, or being ginger for that matter, but it gets boring after a while when people keep reminding you of the fact. ...

This is like.. Gravy without the chicken stock. Bland and nothing too special, but still altogether nice. I'm ont a large fan of the depressing stuff, poetry or otherwise, but ...

Oh my gosh... isn't your boyfriend the romantic ^^ I liked this, it is very sweet and made me stop and think about my own relationships and how I sometimes ...

Hmm... It's a good poster, but maybe it could be more eyecatching? Nice casting though =]

Ooh.. 5/10 for truth =]

This is a confusing piece.. But for your first attempt, well done. I am in the beginner stages still and I can't give much advice or help [How useful am ...

Okay, this is pretty simple stuff, something little kids might read maybe... But I hope you'll like it... =] ------------------------------------------------------------------- Counting numbers, Close

I completely agree with you on this one. I too have recieved a lot of harsh comments on some of my work, some which really hurt and I though 'well... ...

Swirling colours, Chanting children, Springing up and down. Lifted up, Into the air, Spinning round and round. Count the times, Little feet stomp, Listen to the thump. Watch the rope, ...

Oooh... Deep =] 7/10

I have to say, this poem made me frown and I dont fully understand the structure and composure to be truly honest. Your rhyming is good, but some of your ...

Okay... I liked this because it has good imagary but I don't think that it flows all too well. In my opinion, this is because of the second verse and ...

I liked this actually, and I was surprised that I did. It was funny and reminded me of Dr. Zues... whether or not you find that an insult or a ...

I loved this as you made the man out to be a mysterious and handsome person. You're imagary and structure was good, I think, and I particularly liked the last ...