GingerLizzy

Hm.. I liked this but the structure/flow of it put me off a little. It was a wonderful story behind it, and I'm sure a lot of people know how ...

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Username: 50% [All the difference in cases and letters/numbers confuses me] Custom Title: 60% [It's like I've entered the conversation in the middle...] Avatar: 60% :] Country: 80% [There's pens ...

This was actually quite good and you had a funky little rhyming scheme, although I find the scheme maybe a little too "happy" for the story behind the poem. You ...

Hm, I was walking home the other day when my brother started talking about puddles. Then he got all hyped up and started talking about "What if you stepped on ...

Lorna Jones She pondered over the stories that David had just told her. He seemed fine enough now that his leg was supported, but how were they all going to ...

Lorna Jones She had wandered down to the lower decks now, only because of the complaining staff. I'll sue this company for all the money it's got, she thought as ...

When I think of this, the idea of clockwork orange strikes up in my brain. It's not so much rehabilitation, as it is counselling. This could help people to deal ...

Ooh, these are really good and you've used the colour well. I think the only thing I can really comment on is the amount of white in the whole picture. ...

Lorna Jones She was the only one left in the restaurant, after batting away the foreceful pleads of the staff to go to her room. She was sat trying to ...

I was actually, in my IT class and needed to find a passage of sample writing, which in the end I didn't use and instead wrote my own. Then I ...

It was indeed, cute, but not very original. I loved your third stanza, I thought it was very well written with an almost childlike defiance of a little gremlin thing. ...

Hm, not so sure what to make of this if I'm honest.. I liked it, and I didn't. The idea was probably okay, but I felt that it wasn't really ...

Hm, I see where you're coming from. I seem to have lost the flare that I used to have when it first came out. The films are all well and ...

Hello my name is Jules, and I'm not from Holland. I haven't a clue if I've done that right. I think it was quite clever.. *shuts up*