GingerLizzy

I liked this, especially the structure of the first verse, which I thought was written beautifully. You're rhyming and flow works well and I like your slight repetition. The imagary ...

Oh my goodness Sarah, this is great. I love the eyes, as they are super green and all the colouring is perfect. I can't colour in the lines, let alone ...

I liked this, and your first verse was a capturing few lines that made me want to read the rest. I liked how you built up the agrevation that arises ...

I thought this was a beautiful piece and your imagary was a work of art. I imagined it that way while reading and saw the rose, gently budding. I saw ...

Welllll.. This was too good for words to be honest. It made me feel all groovy inside and also a bit bleh, 'cause at the moment in time, I'm not ...

Yes, I agree with you on that point Sureal. I momentarily forgot the fact that they left that girl alone, with her two younger siblings while they went out with ...

I love John Cusack with a fiery passion [Ahem] It's a good picture mind, if I wasn't tol a title I could say who it was. Thought about adding colours ...

I like both of the female pictures as the colours match beautifully and you have only used the simple colours, black and red. Your drawing stucture of the charecter is ...

Views on this. Portuguese police have been question the mother of Madeline and soon after her release from questioning, speculation began to arise as to why she was being interrogated ...

This is very sweet and I wish someone would say something like this to me one day. I got the impression that, even though it probably wasn't, it was an ...

Not too sure about the structure of your poem but I liked your imagary and description as it was very eery and made me get goosepimples. I liked your first ...

Gosh the [eth] confused me a little, but to be honest, that doesn't take much. I'm not sure how I feel about this poem, all I know is that I ...

I stood before the jury, awaiting the thud of the heavy wooden hammer to hit the table. If only it was that simple, these guys liked torture, although anything could ...

I yawned lazily, nearly asleep as the bleach blonde monster stood at the front of the class, droning on about something or other while everyone ignored - naturally of course. ...

Yesterday we lay together, in a field near his house. The sun shone down brightly, bringing out all the shades of green in the grass; each blade shimmering as the ...