GingerLizzy

This is a good piece, but just like with everyone else, I think that you could be a little more precise with your writing standards. Your poem could and should ...

I liked this, as it flowed well in some place [not all] and the rhyming in some parts was beautiful. What did annoy me though was the repition of that ...

It's a very simple piece and I can't help but like it. I liked your rhyming and the rhytm to the poem, as it flowed well and as soon as ...

As I agree with some others who have reviewed this piece, I think, does it really matter that this piece is heavy on the cliche side? Love poems and sonnets ...

Strange and a little patchy with the rhythm and rhymes in some places. It tended to skip instead of flow and this makes it harder for the reader, a.k.a me, ...

I'm not sure about this. I liked it, but I'm still not sure. The rhyming schemes were soft and entwined deep beneath which was good. Although I think it was ...

Wow this is nice, and it's a great idea. I love the name too, very strange and perhaps could be imagined as a fairy/pixie name too? I'm also a fan ...

This is super clever. I liked the first, of the piano and it's a change from the guitar. I love the converse =]

I liked this but maybe you have put your point across about you being worlds apart from the popular kids too straight forward? You could perhaps somehow describe their hair ...

Ooh I forgot; 11- AetLanding 12- KazSmurf Ginger love to them both

When we write serious topics, such as a report on the uprising of crime or maybe a war, we do just that - keep it serious. Some people complain when ...

I liked the plot line and some of the imagary and emotional phrases were good but I have to agree with everyone else and say that it needs some work. ...

This is fabulous. Great use of colour and such, and I wish I could draw like this! =]

I cant think of much to say about this to be truly honet - I'm a lot of help! =] But, I liked it. Even though, in it's length, it ...

Yes, I see where you're coming from Fish, 'cause there seems to be a lot of clearing up after the family, and less investigating. What I don't understand also is ...